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She walks into the frame like she owns the place
and proceeds to take possession of her audience
she is no child, but youth still clings to her
it does not want to let go, it embraces her like a lover
she is a woman, and she is

comfortable in her skin
confident in her gaze
secure in her knowledge

and she awakens things in you
doesn't she

Poem by: Rich Diltz (bodypainter & poet)
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Nobody has ever written me a poem before, I am so touched.
Thanks Rich!  :)

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:iconaglaismilberti:
~Aglaismilberti Jan 12, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
In the unlit realm of depth-less lies
the truth bows to the artists eyes
Yet many souls who viewed the same
Uphold the ones in loss for shame
Til all but boldened hearts remain.

Though substance and measure depart
Tread firm the path laid by your heart
So build creative routes to tread
A map laid out inside your head
And the moments caught skin deep
Reveal the thoughts that make us weep
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:iconmelannc:
*melannc Jan 12, 2013  Hobbyist
This is beautiful, thank you so much for taking the time.
Something I will definitely keep, and come back to.
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:iconaglaismilberti:
Mood: Love ~Aglaismilberti Jan 13, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Poetry is what I do best. Those words are yours inspired by you written to remind us all why we aspire. May you find joy in this life and the next.
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:iconmelannc:
*melannc Jan 13, 2013  Hobbyist
and you as well. :)
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:icontheblackalma13:
Mood: Depressed *theblackalma13 Oct 29, 2012  Student Traditional Artist
The looks of her is the meaning of glorifying.
She's very ravishing.
Doe's this mean that she's craving?
Because I don't want my lustful thoughts to be punishing?
I've seen her in my mind.
Her gorgeous looks made me blind.
The day that I almost died is when her spirit gazed at me.
Did or was her glowing bright eyes cured me or is it calamity.
The day that her spirit looked at me, I trimble towards her and than I fall.
Is my thoughts of her can turn my conduct from Saul to Paul?
Or is it the sign of triumph for diabolical?
My concept of her is that she can be my medcine.
But I have no intentions of seeing her as a sin.

Poem by:Christopher Garrett
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:iconmelannc:
*melannc Oct 29, 2012  Hobbyist
I love poems! Thank you so much for taking the time to write this, I really appreciate it! :)
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:icontheblackalma13:
*theblackalma13 Oct 30, 2012  Student Traditional Artist
Well you're welcome but
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:icongeminiliam:
Now I am bloody jealous, because I wanted to write this poem :-) Stunning, a muse you are
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:iconmelannc:
*melannc Oct 28, 2012  Hobbyist
Oh, thank you. :) I'm always so honored when people write about my images, because it so rarely ever happens.
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:icongeminiliam:
Well you have been beautifully honoured by that poem. I guess the difficulty for any poet writing about your images, (and you are an absolutely amazing model), is that it is difficult to try and write a very whole piece about you without knowledge of who you are in person. We could perceive something in a picture and get it completely wrong. But in that poem the author has captured the magic and awe of a very beautiful young woman and all that she can be spiritually, intellectually, emotionally and physically. I can understand his need to write it for you are a very captivating woman in many ways. Keep working as wonderfully as you do and I have no doubt many more poetic attempts to define you will be penned.
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