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Model: Me

2014 ASYLUM Photo

Valley of Fire, Nevada.

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:iconredlich78:
Critique by Redlich78 Jan 18, 2014, 12:51:13 PM
First off you have and absolutely amazing photo here. There is just something about it that feels primal and yet so much more. It is easily one of the better pictures I have seen to date. The location is great. I mean you can never go wrong with The Valley of Fire. You look great in this. I love the slightly down cast expression and the submissive posture. I think I would have made you more of the star of the photo, but that is really the only thing I would have done diffrently. It definatly makes me wonder why the person in the image is so sad.
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:icondarkappz:
Excelente foto.

Buen manejo de contraste de fondo con la modelo, adecuando trabajo de luz y sombra que permite ver la profundidad y volumen de la modelo aunque se puede mejorar aún así cumple la función de verse 3D.

Muy bella pose que acentúa las curvas de la modelo y expresión muy adecuada a la introspección que generan este imponente lugar, si bien me gusta mucho creo que también podría mostrar su rostro en 3/4 adecuándose a la vista del cuerpo.

Muy buen manejo de proporción aurea, realmente este es un punto muy importante en toda toma.

Y que decir de la modelo, uffff muy hermosa ;D muack! me tiene perdidamente enamorado ;D

(mi humilde opinión)
Bendiciones!
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:iconsacron22:
Sacron22 Featured By Owner Feb 4, 2015
Terrific photo: colors, textures, contrasts, pose.
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:iconshameless-sunset:
shameless-sunset Featured By Owner Jan 28, 2015
fantastic pose

lovely colours
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:iconmelannc:
melannc Featured By Owner Jan 28, 2015  Professional Artist
Thank you!  :)
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:iconmaddi81:
maddi81 Featured By Owner Jun 11, 2014
just awesome - the canyon and the model!^^
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:iconskaramine:
Skaramine Featured By Owner Mar 25, 2014  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
I am at a loss of superlatives to describe how beautiful you are in this environment. 
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:iconmelannc:
melannc Featured By Owner Mar 30, 2014  Professional Artist
Oh, thank you.  :)
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:icondoctororpheus:
DoctorOrpheus Featured By Owner Mar 21, 2014
I could say how beautiful you are like some sort of weird psycho online predator but it is a very beautiful photo :)
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:iconmelannc:
melannc Featured By Owner Mar 24, 2014  Professional Artist
LOL, thank you so much.   :)
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:icondeepkum:
DeepKum Featured By Owner Mar 15, 2014
Don't have words to express... This is a very nicely taken picture.
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:iconmelannc:
melannc Featured By Owner Mar 16, 2014  Professional Artist
Thank you very much.  :)
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:iconauguste59:
auguste59 Featured By Owner Mar 10, 2014
:iconplaywithfireplz:
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:iconmelannc:
melannc Featured By Owner Mar 10, 2014  Professional Artist
:) !!!
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:icontafiux:
tafiux Featured By Owner Mar 9, 2014  Student General Artist
amazing :) i like it
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:iconmelannc:
melannc Featured By Owner Mar 9, 2014  Professional Artist
Thank you!  :)
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:iconmaggie92:
maggie92 Featured By Owner Feb 25, 2014  Student Digital Artist
Very beautiful and artistic!! :D
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:iconmelannc:
melannc Featured By Owner Mar 9, 2014  Professional Artist
Thanks!  :)
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:iconjoergjohannmueller:
JoergJohannMueller Featured By Owner Feb 24, 2014  Hobbyist Photographer
Wonderful location you are in. Beautiful! You're a dream!
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:iconmelannc:
melannc Featured By Owner Mar 9, 2014  Professional Artist
You're so kind, thank you!  :)
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:iconjoergjohannmueller:
JoergJohannMueller Featured By Owner Mar 10, 2014  Hobbyist Photographer
You're welcome!
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:iconkittyme123:
kittyme123 Featured By Owner Feb 16, 2014
I greatly enjoy this piece. You chose your setting and position very well. There are many different interpretations one can take away from this image. Your expression is interesting in the way that there is no one pure emotion. In fact there seems to be an absence of all emotions. Oddly enough the part of this work I can't manage to take my eyes off of is your hair. The highlights contrast well with the brown and the red tones of the rock make them pop out. The mixture of colors is beautiful. 
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:iconmelannc:
melannc Featured By Owner Feb 16, 2014  Professional Artist
I'm so glad you like it, thanks for your comments! :)
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:iconmushyh96:
mushyh96 Featured By Owner Feb 14, 2014
A woman in pre-historic times just sitting there praying and pondering over life....
Oh well, I got weird imagination but I know for sure that you're absolutely gorgeous :)
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:iconmelannc:
melannc Featured By Owner Feb 14, 2014  Professional Artist
Imagination is good!  And thank you!  :)
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:iconmushyh96:
mushyh96 Featured By Owner Feb 19, 2014
Indeed it is.
You're welcome :)
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:iconyarahavie:
yarahavie Featured By Owner Feb 8, 2014
like it 
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:iconmelannc:
melannc Featured By Owner Feb 13, 2014  Professional Artist
Yay, thanks!  :)
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:iconbdc-fotografie:
BDC-Fotografie Featured By Owner Feb 7, 2014  Hobbyist Photographer
Nice pose, nice colours, nice composition. What can I say more? Great picture!
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:iconmelannc:
melannc Featured By Owner Feb 13, 2014  Professional Artist
Thank you!  :)
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:iconhappyapathetic:
happyapathetic Featured By Owner Feb 6, 2014  Professional General Artist
she lost her clothes in the grand canyon? tough break.
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:iconmelannc:
melannc Featured By Owner Feb 13, 2014  Professional Artist
;)
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:iconbadmuphin:
Badmuphin Featured By Owner Jan 27, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
Love your pose...soft juxtaposed with the harsh desert sandstone...troubled and delicate...it certainly elicits emotion

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:iconmelannc:
melannc Featured By Owner Jan 27, 2014  Professional Artist
I'm so glad you think so, thank you.  :)
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:iconteamblazeman:
teamblazeman Featured By Owner Jan 25, 2014
A very nice image, but you look so sad.
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:iconmelannc:
melannc Featured By Owner Jan 25, 2014  Professional Artist
Thank you.  Although I look it, I wasn't sad.  :)
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:iconteamblazeman:
teamblazeman Featured By Owner Jan 25, 2014
The expression in your face looks sad.
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:iconrose700:
Rose700 Featured By Owner Jan 24, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
Wow beautiful!.
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:iconmelannc:
melannc Featured By Owner Jan 25, 2014  Professional Artist
Thank you!  :)
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:iconmoriquesse:
Moriquesse Featured By Owner Jan 24, 2014
amazing photo!!
and you're so beautiful o.o
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:iconmelannc:
melannc Featured By Owner Jan 24, 2014  Professional Artist
Thank you!  :)
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:iconmoriquesse:
Moriquesse Featured By Owner Jan 24, 2014
you're welcome ;)
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:iconjosephxxxx:
JosephXXXX Featured By Owner Jan 23, 2014  Student Photographer
Beautiful colour contrast. And it goes without saying what a completely beautiful sight you are.
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:iconmelannc:
melannc Featured By Owner Jan 23, 2014  Professional Artist
Oh, thank you.  :)
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:icona-krawiec:
A-Krawiec Featured By Owner Jan 22, 2014  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Yeah, like.

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:iconmelannc:
melannc Featured By Owner Jan 22, 2014  Professional Artist
Yay, thanks!  :)
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:iconotrebor2008:
otrebor2008 Featured By Owner Jan 21, 2014
Amazing!
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:iconmelannc:
melannc Featured By Owner Jan 22, 2014  Professional Artist
Thanks!  :)
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:iconchaosfive-55:
Chaosfive-55 Featured By Owner Jan 21, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
Those cliffs form a superb backdrop for your unique essence!!!
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:iconmelannc:
melannc Featured By Owner Jan 22, 2014  Professional Artist
Thank you!  :)
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:iconchaosfive-55:
Chaosfive-55 Featured By Owner Jan 22, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
You're welcome...oh, and I featured "Just Another Tourist" in my Journal today!
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:iconmelannc:
melannc Featured By Owner Jan 22, 2014  Professional Artist
You're the best, thank you!  :)
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