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Model: Me

Vancouver, BC

2012 Michael Cordiez

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For once, I have to write a critique that is not so positive. I do not understand the composition of this picture. My eyes go from the window to the model to the seat without knowing what has to be emphasised. The lighting on the model is nice, but I think that, overall, the picture is too "messy" and, because of that, it is hard to enjoy. The pose is rather awkward. The face doesn't show any emotion. The background might show something interesting but it is (for the sake of overall exposure) too overexposed to even guess something. In summary, I think this picture cannot even dream of matching the numerous amazing other pictures from Melissa.
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Davewerewolf Featured By Owner Oct 23, 2014  Hobbyist
Wow !!  Exquisite !!
I love the atmosphere of this picture , also the way you pose and your awesome shapes.
Congrats !!
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OrionShipworks Featured By Owner May 24, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
I'm very interested in this picture because it relates to what I was trying to do in one of my paintings.
Take a look if you get a chance: orionshipworks.deviantart.com/…
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MorbidHarlequin Featured By Owner Dec 13, 2013
Sublime contrast of textures.  The supple skin is alive as the setting seems old and venerable. The pose is strange, but in the most perfect way. Out of place and time, balletic and delicate as a flower blooming in the pale morning light of the summer dawn. The hint of a smile dances on her lips, much like her form.  Stretching like the smile playing on my lips as I observes the unabashed freedom and uncorrupted beauty of  the scene. A most pleasant diversion indeed.
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:iconmelannc:
melannc Featured By Owner Dec 14, 2013  Professional Artist
Thank you for sharing such detailed thoughts, I appreciate the feedback.  :)
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:iconmorbidharlequin:
MorbidHarlequin Featured By Owner Dec 20, 2013
You're welcome. It seems a waste otherwise.
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:iconxc222:
xc222 Featured By Owner Dec 28, 2012  Professional Photographer
Fantastic!
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:iconmelannc:
melannc Featured By Owner Jan 17, 2013  Professional Artist
Thanks!!! :)
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:iconkillerjewls:
Killerjewls Featured By Owner Oct 31, 2012  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Enchanting
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:iconmelannc:
melannc Featured By Owner Nov 8, 2012  Professional Artist
Thank you. :)
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:iconsylviad:
sylviaD Featured By Owner Oct 18, 2012
Kind of an awkward pose...
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:iconmelannc:
melannc Featured By Owner Oct 18, 2012  Professional Artist
Curious you feel the need to make negative comments on photos you *don't* like instead of positive comments on ones you do.....and with only 2 photos in your own gallery.....very curious, indeed.
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:iconsylviad:
sylviaD Featured By Owner Oct 19, 2012
I make hundreds of positive comments every week, thank you. And I've been here a hell of a lot longer than you have.
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:iconmelannc:
melannc Featured By Owner Oct 19, 2012  Professional Artist
Good for you. I suppose being here longer than other people, and only having 2 pictures in your gallery makes you better than those of us that focus on making our own art instead of nitpicking at others? You certainly deserve a gold star for your longevity here.
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ssfialho Featured By Owner Oct 17, 2012
i love this photo!
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:iconmelannc:
melannc Featured By Owner Oct 20, 2012  Professional Artist
Thank you, so glad you like it.
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:iconianmsquee:
ianmsquee Featured By Owner Oct 9, 2012
Gorgeous Pose! :icontinoplz:
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:iconmelannc:
melannc Featured By Owner Oct 20, 2012  Professional Artist
Thank you! :)
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:iconianmsquee:
ianmsquee Featured By Owner Oct 22, 2012
:iconblush--plz: you are very welcome!
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:iconvwolff:
vwolff Featured By Owner Oct 8, 2012
lovely pose
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:iconmelannc:
melannc Featured By Owner Oct 20, 2012  Professional Artist
Thank you! :)
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:iconstephben:
stephben Featured By Owner Oct 7, 2012  Hobbyist Photographer
very nice
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:iconmelannc:
melannc Featured By Owner Oct 20, 2012  Professional Artist
Thanks! :)
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tonystarkrules Featured By Owner Oct 6, 2012  Hobbyist Photographer
Excellent! Body pose, lightng an contrast balance! Awsomely well done! GREAT!
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:iconmelannc:
melannc Featured By Owner Oct 20, 2012  Professional Artist
Thank you so much.
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:icondarkslyer7raven:
darkslyer7raven Featured By Owner Oct 5, 2012  Professional Digital Artist
why u r so stunning!
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:iconmelannc:
melannc Featured By Owner Oct 20, 2012  Professional Artist
Thank you. :)
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:icondarkslyer7raven:
darkslyer7raven Featured By Owner Oct 20, 2012  Professional Digital Artist
for what my dear? for stating a fact? :D no need :)
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:iconasimoes:
asimoes Featured By Owner Oct 5, 2012
absolutely seductive and extraordinarily beautiful!
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:iconmelannc:
melannc Featured By Owner Oct 20, 2012  Professional Artist
Thank you. :)
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:icongabrielx-com:
gabrielx-com Featured By Owner Oct 5, 2012  Professional Digital Artist
Sexy tummy :)
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:iconmelannc:
melannc Featured By Owner Oct 20, 2012  Professional Artist
Thanks. :)
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WhoAreYou1978 Featured By Owner Oct 5, 2012
This makes me think that your meeting the day or the day is meeting you !! Lol :hug:
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:iconmelannc:
melannc Featured By Owner Oct 20, 2012  Professional Artist
:)!
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